Thursday, November 03, 2011

Easter Poster Version #2

After some wonderful advice, (Thank you EDM'ers), on my last post I have taken heed &  and this is another version of my Easter Poster. I still think it needs work.
Fay, I originally had an egg shape for the sign but it did not stand out so I was hoping a star burst would. I will keep my thinking cap on!
Thank You!!




7 comments:

Vicki Holdwick said...

Very, very nice. I think they will be thrilled with it.

xoxo

Jenny said...

Hey Clare... this is looking really good... looks like you have mastered layers... you clever thing :))

Have a great day...
Jenny x

Sunshineshelle said...

I love the poster & Easter colours, very cute bunny and there is only one suggestion if you are worried the sign your bunny is holding doesn't stand out...
I think red is too overpowering but maybe 100 magenta or a bright intense blue starburst with the type (Annual Good Friday etc) in WHITE reversed out of the sign?
You (and they) should be very happy as you probably know there are so many good solutions to anything, I believe your poster is great as is, but my suggestion was just if you wanted bunny's starburst sign to maybe stand out a little more from the white background, you could always do a few of the polka dots in whatever colour it ends up in as that would tie it in with the rest of your artwork.
Thanks for dropping by my post, I've really enjoyed seeing your fantastic art, you certainly are very creative & it's great to extend your artwork into posters too... well done!

Clem said...

That's great, Clare ! Congratulations for having been commissioned, it's nice, sweet colors and very dynamic at the same time :)

Kathy Walker said...

I like this version better than the first, the drop shadows were very distracting. Also prefer the new font for the sign, have you thought about reducing the font size for the Royal Children's Hospital Raffle - bit? right now it is all screaming at me. If you reduce the text size it might fit on one line and you won't have "raffle" as an orphan, also the pink behind the text on the diamond egg is a bit bright, making it hard to read the text. You don't mention where you can get the tickets, but maybe that will be obvious :), Otherwise looking good.

lori vliegen said...

this is really cute!! i love it just the way it is!! have a great weekend! :))

Elizabeth Rose Stanton said...

I like 'em both :)