Wednesday, November 02, 2011

WIP... 1st Version of My Poster

Any comments on how to improve are most welcome and appreciated.




6 comments:

Vicki Holdwick said...

Hi Clare,

This is looking really good. If I was to change it at all, I might reduce the size of the shadows a bit.

Just a thought: I might also change the border color from that greenish color to one of the colors in the main part of the poster.

Love the eggs and the bunny!!

xoxo

Fay Merritt Iseminger said...

I really like the colors and the composition. I might try enlarging the bunny and downsizing the top of his sign a little. The sign could push out over the background border even more. The other thing I would play with is the font in the sign. I would think something really clean and easy to read. This would also allow you to make it smaller to fit the new size of the sign and still have be easily read. Actually, the more I look at it, I think I would remove the starburst effect from his sign and give it the same shape as the eggs. The starburst is kind of distracting and takes up some room that could be used for a larger font size. I like the polka dots that match his tie, and also blend with the egg shapes. It's going to be a nice poster. Good creativity.

bettyfromtexas said...

You've gotten some excellent feedback. All I would add is. . . . (drumroll) . . . GOOD luck with the raffle :-)

Clare said...

Wow, Thank you sooo much for the feedback & ideas. I have had a play around in p/shop and have version 2, still a WIP. Betty I am making this for Uncle Bob's, a charity here in Australia. I was given an art easel they did not want and the poster is in return.

raena said...

Looks like you got some good advice here! Don't you just love the internet!? I imagine my 'good luck' is a little late in coming, but I wish it anyway!

thepinkrachael said...

I love the eggs and the bunny1 good luck getting it finished - I'm sure they'll be thrilled with it!x